The rewrite is on and the hollow is perhaps a bit darker place than I realized at first. I plan to delve into it deeper in this book but, yes, in spite of myself–there will be another. And maybe more? The story deepens as I go begging more telling I think.
But, back to the work at hand. I am working on reducing the chapters to single scenes instead of going on so long about several at a time. Condensing the work, making it “tighter” as they say. It should make it flow better and be easier to follow and more exciting I hope.
So enough writing about writing. Time to put pen to paper, fingers to keyboard, nose to the grindstone–and write!